Nov 20, 2011

Love is......
















Love is,


Nursing you when you were an infant,

Teaching you to recognize the alphabet,

Listening you babbling,

And slipping an umbrella into your bag.



Love is,

Dressing you a coat when it gets cold,

Cocking a delicate meal and waiting patiently,

Hugging you and kissing your cheek,

And saying “goodnight” before a sweet dream.



Love is,

Playing basketball together and acclaiming you,

Working a part-time job to buy a Christmas gift for you,

Reviewing in the library and helping out each other,

And saying “happy birthday” to you at 0’clock.



Love is,

Staying with you whatever happen,

Love is based on who are you but not what do you do.

Everyone is seeking the true love,

Love is around you.

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9 comments:

  1. kethyw11aNovember 21, 2011 5:23 p.m.

    Your poem is pretty good, apart from some grammar mistakes but overall it's a nice poem. And on your second stanza, I think you meant "cooking" instead of "cocking" which is what you wrote.

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  2. jelina^^November 21, 2011 6:26 p.m.

    I love how you described love as something made up of littles details in life. I really liked it, it made me think of my childhood. Great job!

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  3. minhaNovember 21, 2011 9:09 p.m.

    I liked this poem because it made me think of some of my personal memories as well. Nice poem! (:

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  4. MaggielfNovember 21, 2011 9:53 p.m.

    I like your peom
    We are seeking the true love but that is really difficult to find out usually~

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  5. AnonymousNovember 21, 2011 10:51 p.m.

    This poem is so cute!
    I liked how you transitioned from loving family to loving friends to loving that someone special. My favourite part was "working a part time job to buy you a Christmas gift."
    -Suzanne L

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  6. Richard WangNovember 21, 2011 11:26 p.m.

    Cool poem. Very good.

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  7. UnknownNovember 22, 2011 7:57 p.m.

    You made really good comparisons, and your poem is really easy to relate too.
    - Amy

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  8. Madelaine LiNovember 22, 2011 8:22 p.m.

    I love how your poem talks about every type of love, and the details remind me of my own family. The poem is touching my heartstring!

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  9. AlexNovember 22, 2011 11:36 p.m.

    Very personalized poem which triggers emotions in the audience, which in turn causes them to connect to this poem. Good job.

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